Name
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First Name
Last Name
Email
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Student Intials
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Short Story Title
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Did the beginning draw me in?
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Did I understand the tone and genre right away?
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Was I curious to keep reading?
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Did the story feel complete—with a beginning, middle, and end?
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Was there a clear conflict, question, or turning point?
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Did the ending feel earned or satisfying?
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Did the main character feel real, unique, or memorable?
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Did I understand what they wanted or needed?
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Did they change, grow, or make a meaningful choice?
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Did the writing style feel clear and consistent?
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Did the writer’s voice come through?
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Were there any lines or images that stood out to me?
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Did the story make me feel something (tension, sadness, joy, etc.)?
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Were there themes or messages that came through naturally?
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Was the point of view clear and consistent (first person, third person, etc.)?
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Did it feel like the right choice for the story?
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Did the title feel connected to the story?
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Was it interesting, memorable, or emotionally resonant?
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One thing I really liked was:
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One part that could be clearer or stronger:
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One thing I’d love to see more of:
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One thing I’m still wondering about:
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Use this space to add any final encouragement or thoughts.
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Promise to the Student
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I read with care and curiosity, not just critique.
I gave honest but kind feedback.
I supported the writer’s voice and vision, even when offering ideas.
I remembered this is a draft, not a finished product.